Jay Manuelis a Canadian American make-up artist. He is most recognizable as the former creative director on the popular reality television show America's Next Top Model... (wikipedia)
You missed a line and there was nothing engaging about your delivery.
This is probably the best you've ever done. You've improvised and are a joy to watch frame after frame.
I need you to work on being comfortable in your skin.
In the world of fashion, nothing is ever comfortable.
Pretty really comes from inner confidence; it's when you feel good about yourself.